I will graduate in 2012.

Mr.Romero can you please grade me on my intro/conclusion and my voice. thanks :)


How many students does it take to screw in a light bulb? Well none unless they graduate, and I plan on being one of the many students graduating in 2012. Not every student graduates from high school and moves onto college. Sometimes they don't even have people supporting them at all. I only need 3 main things to support me which are, my family, friends and a job.



First off is my family. They support me through anything and everything no matter what. But my number one supporters are my mom, and my dad. They have been supporting me, and pushing me to do the best I can in school. The rest of my family are also good supporters, they all want the best for me. I will be the first girl in my family to graduate from high school and move onto college.




Secondly are my friends. Wow! What would I do without them. I've had friends come and go, but my real friends are the ones that stick by my side. They are my second supporters, my second family basically. Going through school and other personal things in my life, I can always count on them to give me advice.




Last but not least, is a job. That is like my third supporter through my whole life. I need a job in order to support myself, and also my family if I have one. It isn't that easy keeping a job now a days, people are getting fired. That's why I will go to college and have a good job to support myself through life.




In conclusion, I only need 3 things to support me through everything. Family, friends, and a job are most important right now. I will be one of those students screwing in a light bulb to graduate in the year 2012.